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All Deviations
All Deviations

Why can't I fail at Failing? by *riknard:iconriknard:



  A tornado, a multi-dimensional maelstrom of muck- leaving all it smashes in place but the pseudo-carnage fundamentally void of purpose where intent and focus dwelt before. Churning at core and periphery - consisting of hideously caustic wind, hot brutal mucuousy torrents of precipitation, glass-sharp shards of beautiful crystal - taking all in its path; ironically, it advances tentatively, yet leaving catatonic souls in its wake. As it parades through the streets of Hades, the essences it strips feeds it as lightning nourishes the destruction of sylvan splendor.

  Seeing its backside - its departure and with hope its dissapation, counting the minutes/hours/days it wove its path of malice, the smudged and weary survivor peeks from the battle zone, fearing the sun's spotlight and its revelation of the downtrodden, yet also within is the seed of recovery sprouting in this one's engaging "Hi, some weather we're having, huh?" to another torn innocent pushing their own way out of the debris.

Jul 7, 2007
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swirling depression can affect people differently - this is only one way to describe it
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=Maurya2:iconMaurya2: Jul 7, 2007, 12:17:50 PM
you have hit the 'nail on the head'.....great symbolism.and imagery..and as you said earlier..it is nice to have a poem that may change the 'color of their stripes'...:)

being an out of towner..sylvan was one of the small towns hit recently?

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~ everyone into the lifeboat, baby
...cause this ship is going down ~

my mantra ~ absenceoftouch ~
*riknard:iconriknard: Jul 7, 2007, 3:46:43 PM
in this sense, sylvan referred to forested areas in general - it only takes a single lightning strike to start a fire that could eventually clear a forest area the size of Rhode Island, although fires that big are real rare.

and thanks...

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Someone who works with their hands is a laborer.
Someone who works with their head and their hands is a craftsman.
Someone who works with their head, hands and heart is an artist.
-Chinese proverb

Fall down seven times, get up eight.
-Japanese prvr
=Maurya2:iconMaurya2: Jul 7, 2007, 6:22:52 PM
we have a sylvan reserve....poor ri...

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~ everyone into the lifeboat, baby
...cause this ship is going down ~

my mantra ~ absenceoftouch ~